trying something new with this - steps:



that of course got jumped on for a) boring pose and b) fuck pinups - so I came up w/ somewhat more of a story with the piece, but the piece was too calm, too boring, too confusing. Idea was basically to have bombface tagging badfunks back though, and that was the idea to stick with.
My first thought was just change the perspective ya? That makes for good compositions right? (FUCK NO). Anyways I impressed myself with the perspective on this so I actually liked it until stone snapped me back into reality, as the up shot doesn't really help the piece at all and just adds more questions. The mirrored poses don't help either haha
What ended up being done based on some drawovers from stone was the idea to stack 3 of them ontop of eachother in a comic back sort of style. I have lines for the final one but I figured I'd include this one with a different last panel instead. Actually looking at it now I COULD change it to something like this to remedy a lot of the problems the piece is currently having... but then i lose my great crushed wall... I hate this piece ahah
more soon now that I decided I can post what I'm working on I'll be able to update much more frequently.
The next piece is to explain flow and rhythm. We want to avoid using too much evenness in forms and shapes, and thus the idea is instead to vary the sizes and lengths of shapes in order to create something more interesting. It's almost like creating a rhythm within the flow of the shape - like in music - that adds more flavor to it. Rather than playing 3 quarter notes we could swap that up into different holds on the note to make something more jazzy or more smooth. I have to test out just how far I can push the boundaries of anatomy with this though.
And then http://okashichan.deviantart.com/ did a drawing of zephyr :D woo. So cool.
and I learned a valuable lesson about trying to make quick fixes on the face w/ eyepatches hahaha
ordered left row down then right row down - so the first would be simon punching forward and 2nd would be kittan and yoko standin w/ daryl and gimmy.
I figured who better to start with than Alex Ahad - seriously one of my favorite artists as far as composition is concerned (and really just in general).